Monday 29 April 2013

My Readers...Connect with me..

OMG where are you!
Honestly I'm disappointed with the poor reader/visitor feedback on my blog. Don't blame you...I'm a little dumb when it comes to being net savvy. Please email me @ ashimch@yahoo.com ....if you have something good/bad to say about my book. Your comments will help me to improve my next book which, very likely, is a sequel!
Will u like one? Say yes or no...Connect with me. cheers!

Friday 19 April 2013

Sameer Srivastava a friend who is a Colonel writes...

Dear Ashim Da,
Finished reading The Sergeant's Son last night. It is undoubtedly a wonderful piece of writing, narration which almost transits the reader to reality, sad at places but sprinkled with the Kalu's small little happy moments in his own ways.....
I think you have very aptly brought out a message that in majority of the cases one cannot override reality or 'what we are' in an exponential way.
Seeings Kalu's dreams shatter reminds every Indian of some moment in his/her life. And the fact that Samar accepts this in the end is also true because most fathers would not like to appear as losers to their kids by acknowledging their inability to fulfill their requirements.
Once again the narration, research and choice of words, anecdotes and settings comes alive, atleast to readers like me who can understand Armed forces, Bengalis, Allahabd, Mumbai, Cantonment, etc!!!
Congratulations once again!!!! My first time read of a book written by someone I know well!!!
Best Regards
Sameer

Thursday 4 April 2013

Review in the Business Standard 28 March 13


Fact as fiction

This innocent and charming boyhood tale is refreshing in that it keeps the reader's attention without going too deep into the darkness of growing up

An idyllic childhood is usually not the stuff of a great book. Without the torment of a bully or the tyranny of an abusive elder, the plot rarely thickens. Yet, this innocent and charming boyhood tale is refreshing in that it keeps the reader’s attention without               going too deep into the darkness of growing up.

The Sergeant’s Son is the story of Kalu, a boy born in the darkness ofamavasya, or a new-moon night. That is why, his mother tells him when he asks about his colour, he was born with a dark complexion. In a nation of coloured people, where fairness is coveted, Kalu is vexed at being thus singled out by nature. For us, as Indian readers, Kalu’s distress is easy                          to understand, as is his mother’s explanation. We know what he is talking about.

In fact, this is the kind of familiarity that marks most of the book. The stories about family, friends, school, the neighbourhood dynamics in a big city and a small town ring a bell. We have encountered similar people and waded through situations quite like the ones through which the author takes his protagonist. One such character is Kalu’s father, Sergeant Samar (and hence the name of the book). “Samar regularly subscribed to Desh, the leading Bengali literary journal. He would read the magazine from cover to cover. It was because of him that the children got into the habit of listening to the news on the radio both in the morning and at night.” If you belong to a Bengali family or know of one, you are sure to have met Samar, albeit under another name. Bengali men of a certain vintage are deeply nostalgic about the literary traditions of Desh and the English news on the radio.

The book takes us into a world we know. The characters are people we are likely to have met in the everyday humdrum of our lives. We are also most likely to have been in similar situations as the protagonist finds himself in or, at the very least, know of people who have been there. For example, the pressure of securing a rank in class even after firmly securing the teacher’s approbation is a familiar story. Kalu is often burdened with the need to excel in his class, even though “more than studying, his interest lay in drawing and colouring”. And then, there are those who never believe in his talent, accusing him of copying the pictures he drew from books and magazines with tracing paper. These attitudes cut deep and shape much of Kalu’s character as it develops through the rest of the book. Sceptics live among and within us, and we are sure to encounter them all through our lives. But the ones who make the most impact are those we meet when we are young; when our talent is only as good as what others say it is.

The book also gives us an insight into a world that we have long left behind. The Bombay the author describes is as far from the present as one can imagine. The travelling salesmen, selling everything from cakes to sugarcane to ice cream, for instance, are not part of the city’s landscape anymore. Nor can one imagine stealing mangoes off trees in the heart of the city. Similarly, the Allahabad that the author takes us to exists in an era long gone. It lives only in the literature of those times.

The book is faithful in the way it paints these places. It is almost as if we can see the bazaars of Allahabad with pushcarts stacked with vegetables and grain. Even though it may be impossible to find such a place in the city today, the book takes us there.

The strength of the book is that it deals with the known. It does not take an unfamiliar turn. But, in a way, that is its weakness too. At no point does the book make us wonder, “What next?”. The father’s stoicism, the mother’s frustrations, the rivalries that colour sibling relationships, and the sexual forays of a repressed adolescent do not bring any surprises. The author works with stereotypes; while there is no denying the fact that these are real people, it may not have been imprudent to sketch in a few edges to their personalities. Fiction does give one that liberty and the author may have done well to exercise that.